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Still

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Literature Text

Is it easy to say something bad
and yet still hard to say something good?

Do people want to reach for someone
                But no, silent still, there are no words?
People are still afraid of this hurt
                But they hurt more still to silent stay?
People are still afraid of that hurt
                But still, if you speak that hurts later?

I think a poem says something about
you and me in broken lines
but still no one listens
and so people still
silently hurt
I made this in about half an hour to test out the waters of dA literature. Please critique, but not too harshly!
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doctortenma's avatar
makes me cries

so goodz!